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Craig

The essay “Little League Hits a Homerun”, Aaron takes on a topic very dear to my heart. I was once a Little Leaguer and ended up playing ball for a good 16 years of my life. Furthermore I now coach baseball and had the great opportunity to coach a Little League team myself this summer. With that being said, Aaron’s paper was a very enjoyable read to me. Having played baseball for a good part of my life, finding out the history of the sport was very appealing to me. Aaron essay did a great job at providing the reader with History and facts of the formation of the league and policies.
“Little League Hits a Homerun” essay from what I gather not only presents the reader with the History of the league but depicts society as it changes through the decade. One prime example Aaron focuses on is Racism and segregation of not only in society but how the Little League dealt with this issue as well. I would have to say that the paper sticks with his thesis dealing with little league connection with society. I think that essay does a great job at touching on topic that have been and still are debated upon.
All in all the essay written by Aaron was a well written, that offers the reader a unique look into the history not only of Little League but society as well. Aaron does a great job on interviewing society and the issues that were factors of the time into how they affected the history of Little League.
On the downside of things, Aaron’s essay while well written seemed to get lost in the facts and history for me. I would have like to have seen the paper include a little more unique topic. Don’t get me wrong the paper was interesting; I just seemed to get lost in all the facts of the paper. I would have liked to see some personal reactions or feeling by those individual that played in the World Series. Maybe have a little more about how foreign teams have done and their reactions. Another topic maybe could be about some of the recent scandals that have arisen in the last couple of years. I think that maybe I just know too much about Little League baseball and that there would always be something that I would find not touched enough for me at no fault to the writer.
All in all I really enjoyed the paper. I was impressed with the organization and format of the history and connection with society. This essay gives me the facts of something that is very dear to my heart, “Little League Baseball”.

Letter Grade B

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