peer review

This is a critique of Syrene Tanagras paper.  I'll start with the negitives---since that is easier.  I found that in parts there where generalizations of both the Asian and American cultures.  Be carefull not all american children live or lived the comfortable life of the suburbs.  Also i found some of the footnote a bit unnessacary.  Those were the two most glaring weaknesses.  THe strenths were that the evidence was more than enough.  i liked that there were many asian clutures represneted.  your anaylsis was thoughtful and insightful.  I learned alot.  there were also few editorial errors and the reading was delightful instead of laborous.  Thank You Aaron LArocca   

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[Charlotte Bailey]

You mentioned in your article or paper that you should have spoken directly to one of the players from the Charleston Little League. Well, my husband is a team member and would be happy to speak with you about the very heart rendering experience. He tells me of the experience. I sent you an indept email and think it was not transmitted. I will email you agin.

Mrs. Bailey, wife of John Bailey
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